Friday, April 24, 2015

A story " The case of the Diamonds in the desk"

Today I am going tell you a story called The Case of the Diamonds in the Desk.  This book is all about 2 junior detectives who try to solve real crime! Here is how the story goes.....

Milo was sitting in his desk. he was thinking all about the jewel robbery that happened in the city. Thieves broke into a jewelry store and smashed very jewel showcase. They took all the gold,diamonds,silver,rings and more. The most expensive things that they stole were a diamond necklace and a tiara from the famous soap opera star, Trixie Astor. The insurance company was rewarding 1 million dollars to whoever found the 2 items.Milo smiled dreamily to the sight of him shaking Dash Marlowe {a very famous detective} in the crowd of over a thousand people!

Soon his teacher {Mr. Davenport} called on him to answer the question on the board. Milo stared at his teacher and thought about the problem. His teacher got impatient and asked the next student. Milo's friends Noah and Carlos were looking at him straight in the eye like they felt sorry for him. Then it was time to go to art. When Milo was getting his art smock inside his desk he felt something round and hard?

It was a diamond necklace! He was astonished by the sight of a real life diamond necklace that probably costed 1 million dollars in his desk.  After Art it was time for recess. He went over to where Jazz {his best friend and detective parter} was and dragged her to the other side of the playground. Soon Milo showed Jazz the diamond necklace that he found. Jazz was just as surprised as Milo was in the first place.Milo snd Jazz then went to every girl in the playground in order to ask them i they lost a necklace. But they found nothing.

What Jazz wanted to know was if the diamond necklace was really real. He blowed his breath on it and found out that the necklace was real. Since they knew it was real they asked everybody they knew. Soon they figured that they should work backward. The janitor told them that saw the necklace on the floor and she thought it was mine so she put it there. Then they asked Spencer and Mandy if they had the necklace before. They both said that Spencer gave it to Mandy as a gift. It all leaves up to one last person. They found out on their way to the principal's office that there was a little girl in the way.

The girl said that she lost a necklace. Milo asked if it was diamond and so she showed it to her. By my surprise the girl said she lost in the playground because she must have dropped it. The little girl's mother came and saw the necklace. She told Jazz that the necklace they found was her's and that her daughter just wanted to wear it to look fancy since one of her classmates looked super fancy.

                                                        They solved the case again
                                                      Goodbye!

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