Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Best Poems (Influenced my poem books)

 Nature

Look at the forest,
It is beautiful and colorful,
It has many species inside of its greetings,
And of course there is mother nature,
Mother Nature rises up and has the cycle of life,
She disciplines us to become what is right,
If we do not listen we cannot become one,
With the one and only good creator,
The forest is green,
With anxiety,
Of animals coming from different variety's,
This land is our home,
And infiltrated with fires,
These people what are they doing?
There ruining there own land for a viewing,
They don't know the circumstances to the Earth.

Technology

Phones and computers,
Laptops and iPods,
What are they doing in this vast planet you say?
These electronics you see come from many variety's,
They are small and thin and large and thick,
But always the right thing for a person with no link,
In the past they were not that important in a person's life but now in the present they are essential to a human being,
In the future they will become even more useful and will be bought continuously,
For you never know when they will become everything,
This technology can become even more advanced like maybe jetpacks will be invented,
Or even better levitation boards and trains (Levitation).
But for now we must stick to what we have and hope for it to come.

Fire

I see Fire,
Ever burning in the dark mist,
It is a beautiful with yellow and orange and red,
This burning object is heated spirit,
It can close in on someone and burn them but it can also help people,
It can heat up marshmallows and hotdogs,
It can give warmth in winter,
The good thing is that it can be destroyed with water.


Rinchen


Rinchen is the best and better then the best
In his burning spirit he can do anything
Nourishing his wounds and fighting to the end
Criticizing him means bad luck for you
He can astound his grades and behavior for you
Every single day he is 10xs better then his sister
Next time you meet him be his friend okay!

Monday, January 25, 2016

The Snowy Day

A Snow day

One day there was a kid named Dave. Dave liked to play in the snow or have hot co co. Today was the perfect day for that. It was winter and snow was pouring down from the sky. He decided to play outside with all of his friends in the snow but he only had one glove and thought should I really go  out. Dave thought about all the bad things that could happen but decided not to worry and went out He had a snowball fight with his friends and of course his team won. From that  point on he thought he was the snowball champion but of course other people could beat him. Like for example, a professional athlete.

 He also had fun by playing tag in the snow. What made that fun was that it would be hard to walk on the snow and the everyone could hide from the tagger. It was sort of a challenge. Dave  liked challenges. The tagger was Andrew one of Dave's friends and the other players were Rocky, Mike, and Christopher. Andrew gave them 10 seconds to run away from him.  Dave started digging a gigantic hole in the snow like an igloo and hid in there. Then he covered the hole with snow. Now Andrew couldn't find him. 

Christopher simply ran as fast as he could through the snow and got caught 5 seconds after Andrew was don't counting.Mike and Rocky both slumped down the snow and covered themselves with it so Andrew wouldn't suspect anything was there. The bad thing was that due to the snow the kids didn't know who was it or not. Mostly because they covered themselves up. 

After an hour Dave, Rocky, and Mike got tired of Christopher not finding them and decided to go home. Everyone had a long fun day but as we aways say. Time goes by when your having fun. Dave went back to his house and decided to drink hot co co. He remembered the time when he bought tho co co from his school at the fundraiser. He wouldn't be having school that day due to the snow blocking the buses.

 Dave read his social studies textbook and discovered lots of facts and things that gave him curiosity. Like how did people know what do to if they could even talk back then when the human race just started.Dave asked his mom and she said that he was a mystery to be discovered. Son he realized it was just pure instinct and later on they made the English language. 

Dave missed his dad. He was on a trip to study as new animal species and would come back until next year. He wondered all the things his dad would say if he was still in the house This made him think of a poem....


My Father

Why father must you leave so soon,
We haven't even talked for a while,
So could you please come back would do,
I just might dial,
You are the man,
That protected me,
And now your gone for a whole year,
Oh can you please come back,
Just for a few more days,
We miss you so much,
And we pray you will be okay,
We love you like a diamond,
That gleamed like the shining sun,
So won't you please come back home please?

THE END

Sunday, January 24, 2016

Poems From Rinchen


                                                           
 My sister had a doll                                   My Sister had a doll,
About two months ago,
But she cut it's hair ugly,
And made it look broke,
Now she can't find it,
And hopes for the best,
Then one day that doll will be her best,
Now I talk to her,
About how it is gone, 
But the next thing you know, 
I saw something under the refrigerator,
And looked at it carefully,
Until I realized what it was,
I showed her the object and she screamed for joy, 
For it was a a doll the doll that was her's.


                                           The Centipede
One day I went outside to play,
But then I found a stray display, 
When I looked at it carefully I knew what it was,
For it was a bug that had more then 5 legs,
With caution and care I took it inside to have a look, 
And googled it up to find what it was,
And after a minute or two minutes tops, I found what it was , a Centipede it must!

                        

                 
                                            The Father that left

It was a sad moment to see someone leave,
For today was winter and snow it has come indeed,
I said farewell and went inside,
While everyone else was finishing there goodbyes,
I played some games and waited for everyone to come inside,
Soon I realized what a mistake I did,
I went outside and chased the car,
And finally made it to see his eyes,
He was astonished and told the taxi to wait,
And when he reached me he said "You were great"...

The Family

The family was good and weird of some type,
One liked cheese,
another liked american cheese,
that was weird,
 but there were some cool things too, like how one of them had a fake gun and shot bubbles,
or when they did skateboard tricks on the ramp,
There was an aunt,
a father,
a sister and brother,
and mother,
his family was one of a kind and truly amazing

Saturday, January 16, 2016

Upside_Down Magic

Nory was trying to turn herself into aa kitten. It had to be perfect and couldn't mess up anything. Nory suddenly said the three magic words. "Kitten, Kitten, KITTEN!" With that Nory was a kitten, sort of. As soon as she opened her eyes she could see her dark fur and kitten paws but something in her teeth made her wonder. Her teeth jiggled and were so tall. Also her paws were covered with sharp claws. Nory realized that she was a half kitten_half beaver. She suddenly got the urge to chew wood and realized her father's office room was so close. It had a famous wooden bookshelf that would be extremely delicious. Soon Nory had eaten almost every wooden object in her dad's office room. Not even that. She ate every wooden object in the house for a matter of fact. Soon Hawthorn (brother of Dalia and Nory) came in the room to find what was causing that ruckus and sure enough it was Nory.

There were lots of different types of powers a person could have. They were separated into different classes. The classes were Flares, Fluxers,  and more. Nory knew that Hawthorn was a flare which had the powers of fire while Dalia (sister)  had the power to help animals. Nory was struggling on her power . She had the powers to turn into animals she just needed to focus it carefully. Most of the time she would always turn into a kitten but then out of nowhere she would gain the decal and ability of another animal and become a combination of two animals. Nory didn't like that and thought she was wonky. Wonky is what most people call kids who can't properly use their powers.

Hawthorn had to call a carpenter to clean up the damage that Nory did and tell a lie. Nory and Hawthorn would have to blame one of Dalia's rabbits for  the damage that couldn't be fixed. The two kids didn't like to do that but then Hawthorn told Nory that sometimes telling a lie is batter then the truth. Nory understood that because she was soon going to be ten and her father encouraged her to try out for attending Sage Academy which was a fancy school only for kids who had special talents.

Soon it was the day for Nory to try out for her attendance to Sage Academy. There were lots of people there. Some who had special talents. Others were scared. Some where confident and most were in the middle. Nory was the last person to go on the line. When she finally made it to the stage she knew what she had to do. Nory would have to pass a number of tests for each class to see which one she would use in the academy. As soon as they said Nory could start the try out she had already failed most of the tests.  

The last one was her specialty. She believed in herself ad luckily for her she actually passed one of the tests. She turned into a kitten but before that she would have to be inspected. The three judges were a teacher, her father's dad, and her father. While her father was inspecting her Dory's animal urgency made her worried. Her dad must've had tuna for his breakfast because now his hand smells delicious since she was a cat. After a few minutes she couldn't take it. She bit her father's hand and it started bleeding. After that it was official that she would not be attending Sage academy.

Right after the try outs Dory went home. She was crying in her bed and at dinner no one said anything. Her father turned invisible and left the family to his office room which had also turned invisible. Dory wanted to say something but she was too afraid to say so.

The next day her father was telling Hawthorn to be ready when she comes. Dory didn't know who was coming. By the time she asked Hawthorn a ring came from the door. When Dalia opened it out came Aunt Margie. Dory didn't know why Aunt Margie was here since she never came after mom died. Dory asked Aunt Margie why she was here and you would believe the reply but that is for another story.....

TO BE CONTINUED....

Saturday, January 9, 2016

Milo and Jazz's Mysteries The Case Of The Diamonds In The Desk.

One day Milo was in his class daydreaming about the jewel heist that happened in the city that Saturday. A group of robbers broke into the Jewelry store in the city and took priceless diamonds and jewels when they left. They also took the special diamond necklace made for Trixie Astor, the most famous soap opera star. He was also thinking about  him and Jazz (partner detective) meeting Dash Marlowe who was the most famous and best sleuth in the world. The two kids have been getting tips from Dash every time they had a crime on the scene. While Milo was having the best dream ever Mr. Davenport woke him up and asked him a math question. Milo didn't reply and Mr. Davenport sighed.

Soon it was time for art. All the kids in the class went upstairs to the art room. When Milo was checking his desk for his cloth he found something very surprising. Diamonds! Milo was shocked to see what was in his desk. Later on he was being very skeptical and thought that maybe the diamonds that he had might be related to the Jewel Heist in the city. Milo was so excited that right after art ended he went straight toward Jazz at recess. Before though he saw some very strange things happening when he went back to class from art before recess started. Mr. Davenport was talking to him about math when he looked shocked and headed toward the window sealing. Milo thought Mr. Davenport had something to do with the whole diamond thing in his locker.

Well at recess Milo and Jazz were talking to each other and Milo told her all about the diamonds. Jazz was being very alarmed and decided we should tell the teacher, adult, or even the police. Milo told her that maybe they could solve the crime but Jazz told him that is this is really connected to the Jewel Heist in the city then we couldn't do it. Jazz told Milo there were just detectives in training and weren't prepared yet.  If they did solve the case and get the 1 million dollar prize award would would they do with the money. They would obviously give the money to their parents anyway so the money would be no use to them at all. Milo told Jazz that they should at least try to contribute to the crime before they tell.

So Milo and Jazz tried whatever they could to help. They went to every spot in the school and asked all the girls if they had a lost a diamond necklace in case it wasn't the same crime as in the city but no one said they lost a necklace. The only person they hadn't asked was Mandy but Milo didn't think Mandy would wear a necklace. She was also a tomboy who played soccer almost every time at school.

 Soon enough the two kids realized what must have happened. While Milo was going to the nurse he saw a little girl and asked her why she was here. She said that she was sick as soon as Milo asked. Then a woman came into the nurse's office and Milo realized that woman was the little girl's mom. he mom was talking to the little girl that first she was sick and then her diamond necklace was stolen. Milo interrupted there conversation and asked the woman if she said that she lost a "diamond necklace".  The woman replied with a yes and Milo showed her the necklace the found. The woman was so happy.

Apparently the little girl took her mother's diamond necklace and went to school with it. Then she was playing in recess and dropped in recess. Then Milo's friend came and saw the diamond necklace. I guess he took it and thought it was his. After that he gave the diamond necklace to the girl he liked and that girl dropped it in Milo's class. The janitor lady then picked  the necklace and put it in Milo's desk because it was the closest and left. That is what happened.

THE END

Monday, January 4, 2016

Esperanza Rising

The Literary Analysis on Esperanza Rising

In this passage I am going to incorporate facts and details suggested to write my literary analysis on “Esperanza Rising”. I have put the topics and paragraphs from each individual order. 
  


Brief Plot Summary 
Esperanza was with her papa. Her papa told her that if you can listen and stay still very quietly you can hear the Earth beating and thumping very slowly. When Esperanza felt it she was amazed. That was one of the last times she ever got to see papa. The following days papa was assassinated by bandits. Luckily Miguel and Alfonso got the body. The bandits took all that he had and when mama heard the news she fainted. Soon Tio Marco and Tio Luis burned Esperanza’s ranch to crisps and dust. Mama agreed to Tio Luis that she would think about marrying him since it was required. Esperanza was shocked by mama’s agreement but mama had a plan. Everyone gathered around that night and soon enough mama had to make a sacrifice and go to America. Esperanza thought to take something so she would always remember the Ranch and took the doll that papa had given to her. Abuelita couldn’t come since she had had a broken ankle from the fire and couldn’t walk. When they got to Zacatecas the train was there. They took the train and when they got to America they gave their fake passports to get in. They were desperate. There they worked in camp for foreigners and raised money. After that Abuelita (grandmother) came because Miguel got her. Esperanza was angry and happy at Miguel. Miguel stole all her money but at least used it for a great cause.


Analysis on Two Main Characters
Esperanza:
Esperanza is a sweet loving girl in the story who is recognized as the daughter of her mama. She is very happy at first in the story but as it goes on she becomes dreary and then strong willed. By the end of the whole story she is a changed woman. She gets motivation from mama because mama gets a disease called valley fever from the dust storm that hit the camp. Esperanza is determined to raise enough money to get her Abuelita back and she is paying all the bills for mama. So Esperanza is brave, hardworking, and thoughtful.

Abuelita:
Abuelita (grandmother) is a very kind woman. She is very old though and is separated from everyone else for a very long time. She is wise though and tells the answers to some of the big questions we readers have. Abuelita is brought back together with her family by a servant named Miguel. Miguel steals Esperanza’s money to bring Abuelita to America. Esperanza not knowing gets into a fit about this. When Miguel comes back with Abuelita everyone is overjoyed. Abuelita is a wise, and compassionate soul.

One Conflict in Story
One conflict in the story was when Esperanza’s house was destroyed in a fire. Abuelita told everyone she knew it was Tio Luis who caused the disaster to happen. Soon everyone was running out of the house and Tio Luis and Tio Marco came. Tio Luis told mama if she would consider the proposal. When mama reluctantly said yes. Tio Luis jumped for joy. He told that when they marry Esperanza would need to learn better manners and that she would live in a much better house then El Rancho De Las Rosas. Abuelita told mama and everyone else that the only reason he wants to marry was so he would get more power in his run for governor. 

One Overall Theme Statement
One overall theme statement in “Esperanza Rising” is to always work hard and never give up. It may also represent integrity since Esperanza was paying the bills and keeping the spare money she had to bring Abuelita to America. Mama didn’t know of this at first so it shows integrity and perseverance at one point. It shows perseverance in many ways.

Setting and Role
The setting of the story is taken place in many scenes. One setting is El Rancho De Las Rosas. El Rancho De Las Rosas’s role in the story is the house of Esperanza and her mama and papa and Abuelita. El Rancho De Las Rosas was burned to crisps by Tio Luis and Tio Marco. The story would definitely change if this setting wasn’t included in the passage because it is the home of some of the main characters. I mean where would they live.

Connection to the History
The connection to history that Esperanza Rising takes place in is the Great Depression. The Great Depression was the longest economic turndown in the history of America. Frank D. Roosevelt (President at the time) was taking serious changes at the time. “ President Franklin D. Roosevelt helped lessen the worst effects of the Great Depression in the 1930’s. The economy would not fully turn around until after 1939. When World War II kicked American industry into high gear”. “The Great Depression began soon after the stock market crash in 1929, which sent wall street into a panic and wiped out millions of investors.”

In Conclusion this is my literary Analysis on Esperanza Rising.  


Cited from “HISTORY” THE GREAT DEPRESSION or HISTORY.COM

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